Eloise's Poetry Corner

Eloise's Poetry Corner

Yup, here I am, baring my soul - or at least, several different snapshots of it. But hey, if you got this far, I don't mind sharing. I'll admit right now most of it isn't anywhere near the league of ... well ... good. Caveat reader, and don't blame me! I know better now, in most cases. Still ... this is how I was. And it's reflected in how I am now, I suppose. Anyway. Enough philosophy, on to the drivel! Oh. Poetry. Right. Here they are, in the order I wrote them.

Moody

A real wallow in self-pity, loneliness, and emptiness. But hey, I was a freshman in college, and seventeen; angst comes with the territory.

Crush

Not my *first* lust-crush, but ... well ... the first one I wrote bad poetry about :-> But *ooh* he was so sexy. He was the captain of the fencing team, and he had style ... I always volunteered to judge his right back ... though I admit I missed a lot of touches at times, from just *gazing* at his cute little butt. Heck, for all I know he still is sexy - Adolfo Caballero, are you out there?

Is it Love?

Written for my next semi-crush ... a more confused one. It's odd ... when I wrote this poem it helped, somehow; sorted things out. But now when I read it I have no idea what I was talking about. I wonder if that's good or bad.

Infinite Variety

Ahhhhhh. My first real relationship ... I lost my virginity with the subject of this poem about a month after I wrote it. Didn't end up working out long-term, but he was a good friend, and, who knows, maybe it was destined I learn about such things with someone that didn't engage my soul. Probably safer that way. Scott, wherever you are, I wish you well, and hope you've found someone as perfect as I did ....

Procrastination

My abiding sin. This poem never quite jelled ... the beginning is good, though.

Faith Betrayed

My most recent, and - I think - best foray into poetry that actually (gasp, urk, grab-at-chest) has *rhyme and meter*! It's not totally consistent, but I tried, and to get the rhymes better I'd have either had to (a) compromise the story's motion, or (b) go for some really sappy, obvious ones. But hey. I'm actually pretty proud of this one, on the whole. I hope you like it too.

My Demon Lover

Ahhhhh. :-> This is for the love of my life, John. Here's lookin' at you, kid. The ... more upbeat trend of this poem's mood reflects my general more-secure-with-lifeness, as contrasted with, say, Moody. You'll see what I mean.

an untitled work

.... and, honestly, not mine. But a friend of mine wrote it, and permitted me to read it, and I really don't think they'd mind me posting it. Valentine Michael, I hope this helps your words to move more people, as they moved me.


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